Saturday, April 23, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Dakota Whitmore is not the world's best traveler. And Drue, her snarky assistant, won't let her forget it! Is it true they only tease you when they like you?


Drue continued to ask for the annoyance factor, but Dakota really did look terrible post-flight, kinda like a cross between someone waiting for a heart transplant and a crash-test dummy on the wrong side of an accident. “Maybe you should have skipped the last four rum and sodas and saved your liver the aggravation.”

“It wasn’t that much! I’m a nervous flier and a dram or two helps to sooth my tension.”

“I could tell by the white-knuckled grip-of-death you had on the armrest. Real Zen-like.”

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17 comments:

  1. Poor Dakota to be that afraid of flying. Nice six!

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  2. Reminds me of me on airplanes. I love the description. Well done.

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  3. lol! I love it when there is intelligent snark, really adds life to a book. :D

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  4. lol awesome! I have your two Laundry Hag books. I need to buy this one too :-)

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  5. Cute description! Love the snark!

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  6. I think she might have had a little more than "a dram" but, I'm with Dakota. She flies like I do. Great six!

    Happy Easter Jennifer!

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  7. Excellent dialogue. Great teaser.

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  8. I'm with Dakota. Love take-offs...hate landings. Drue's Zen comment surely got under her skin, but I do sense a spark between them even though Drue seems determined to douse it in snark.

    Great six, and I still love the premise for this one.

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  9. Love the six. Made me chuckle.

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  10. LOL
    Can't blame a girl for trying to find her "happy place."
    Nice sense of humor in these six.

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  11. I'm with Dakota, especially if we hit turbulence or are taking off on a windy day. Good character-building details!

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  12. I like the vivid language and description here. Good six!

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  13. He's snarky, but a fun snarky. I bet she keeps him! Just hope she doesn't have to fly a lot. :)Fun six.

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  14. Hehe, real Zen-like. I love it! :D

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  15. Love the snark in this exchange. :)

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