Six Sentence Sunday

The ring had been cleansed in the ocean, a materialistic baptism which wiped the remaining vestiges of sentiment from my mind. I saw it now not as a reminder of The Jackass, but as the means to a fresh start. The gorgeous merman had known this, and had given me a new chance.
“Thank you,” I whispered at number 517. I touched the door, but jumped when I heard footsteps inside. I ran and only Merv Griffin knew how fast.
Super six! I like your style. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI'd like to meet the "gorgeous merman". :)
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ReplyDeleteI really like this story. As soon as I get my Kindle next week, I getting this book :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat voice! And congrats on the sales rankings! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteI loved this book so much, I downloaded both of the Laundry Hag books (and finished the first of those in one day!). Love your writing style - you can take me from tears to stitches in one sentence!
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing thhis
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